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作者: 茄子 时间: 2010-9-20 07:00
标题: 秋天是骑行的最好季节
谢天谢地，史上最热的夏天总算过去了。高兴，发一个英文的“秋天是骑行的最好季节”。请多指教。

                        Autumn is the best season for cycling

   When green grass begins to turn yellow, the swallows begin to fly to the warmer places in groups, the golden leaves fly gracefully to the ground, they seem to tell us that, autumn has come.
　
　  Autumn is a harvest season, also it's the best season to do some sports, in which i think to travel with a bicycle is very exciting.  When you ride in a highway which has countless trees stand both sides, ring the bell, pedal smoothly with remarkable speed, you have such a feeling like fly.  In the way, you can enjoy the non-urban scene which interests us so much, also, you can tast the traditional culture.

   Autumn is the best season for cycling.  It's neither hot nor cold, and it's seldom to rain, for cyclists, that's an ideal weather.  I had such activity a few days ago, the route was, from Hangzhou to Huzhou, then returned.  I spent two days to cover the distance.

   Recently, a boy, the member of cycling club, has achieved a goal with a route, from Hangzhou to Lasa, Tibet.  The whole distance is about 3700 km.  We can imagine, how much frustration he met and how much difficulties he overcame in the journey.  Of course, the scene he saw in the way couldn't be enjoyed by ordinary people.

   Which excits us more is,  in Tibetan region, he met a  German, who rode a special bicycle from Germany.  When he arrived China, he has completed a distance of 17000 km, and the next destination was Japan.  It was his plan to ride around the globe!

   I love autumn, I love cycling.

作者: 山里人 时间: 2010-9-20 08:30
文化底看你不懂郁闷~~~~

作者: 枪骑兵 时间: 2010-9-20 09:08
我错了，我不装逼了

作者: codyfeng 时间: 2010-9-20 09:43
文章通俗易懂，但确实很多硬伤。冠词，时态和一些固定搭配需要改正，哦了。

作者: hengtong0577 时间: 2010-9-20 09:48
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作者: 改变心情 时间: 2010-9-20 12:34
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作者: lottol 时间: 2010-9-20 13:11
我英语六级，看懂了，但承认写不出来这样的文章。可以感觉到，国内的CET-6级的及格水平，相当于国外幼儿园的毕业水平。

作者: 音乐车手 时间: 2010-9-20 13:17
what a woulderful season . but you can cycling this route, from Hangzhou to Wenzhou.

作者: 老殿后 时间: 2010-9-20 15:28

作者: lgywz 时间: 2010-9-20 16:18
通仔脑残了？？？？？？？、

作者: 林叶 时间: 2010-9-20 17:01
都是学问哥啊！

作者: wzpht 时间: 2010-9-20 18:41
今年就没几天是适合骑车的。这个烂天气。也许今年要一直到冬天才适合骑车

作者: 茄子 时间: 2010-9-20 21:30

原帖由 枪骑兵 于 2010-9-20 9:08:00 发表
also：其位置大多放在be动词、助动词、情态动词之后，实义动词之前。不可做连词,除非（not only..but also)
sport:n. 运动, 体育。含义比athletics广泛，指各种形式的体育运动，尤指户外的如游泳、钓鱼、划船、登山等运动。
我觉得这两句是并列的，即是丰收又是运动的季节所以用and比价好
Autumn is a harvest season, also it

多谢指教！答复：
Autumn is a harvest season, also it's the best season to do some sports
Autumn is a harvest season, and  it's also  the best season for sport

偏向口语，先说also会有较充分的时间组织下半句。书面语是应该按你写的那样。

think 一般做及物动词用，
i think to travel with a bicycle is ...
i think  travelling  with a bicycle is...

这里think是及物的。不定式to travel跟动名词traveling都带名词性质，都可以的, 是吗？
如：眼见为实 to see is to believe       seeing is believing

下一句表述有问题：
When you ride in a highway which has countless trees stand both sides
When you ride in a highway of which there are countless trees on both sides

例句：There are many trees on both sides of the dell.溪谷的两岸有许多树木。

你这句肯定是对的。我那句是这样的：主，谓，状，定。which 引导的是定语从句，作为后置定语，修饰 highway。

non-urban什么意思？suburban：郊外的

抱歉漏了一个词，应该是：non-urban area,  用它取代 suburban area 是意味着，远离城市的喧嚣。

先发上

作者: 茄子 时间: 2010-9-20 21:36
In the way, you can enjoy the non-urban scene which interests us so much, also, you can tast the traditional culture.

In this way, you can enjoy the suburban scenes which interest us so much, and tast the traditional culture.

我看这两句都是对的。

这篇是我前年在骑行途中写的，很粗糙。非常感谢您对我的帮助！

作者: 茄子 时间: 2010-9-20 21:44
下面的译文是杭州浙江良友车队的朱队长写的。大伙看看咋样。

秋天是骑游的最佳季节

当萋萋芳草地渐渐由绿转黄，燕子开始成群结队飞向温暖的远方，金色的树叶轻柔地飘落大地。一切仿佛告诉我们：秋天已经来临。
秋天是收获的季节，也是一些体育活动的最佳季节。因此，我想，自行车旅行应该是很惬意的。当你骑行在公路上，两旁有数不清的行道树呵护着你，铃儿响叮当，你以快而流畅的踏频蹬踏，一种飞翔的感觉油然而生。一路上，你能感受到远离都市喧嚣的乐趣，吸引你的是田园风光，你还能够体验到乡土传统文化。
秋天是骑游的最佳季节。天气既不冷也不热，雨水也不多。这样的气候，对于骑行者来说，是最理想不过了。几天前，我刚刚完成了杭州至湖州的往返骑行，我花了两天时间骑完了全程。
最近，有个小伙子，自行车俱乐部成员，从杭州骑到西藏拉萨，完成了3700公里的旅程。我们可以想象，在这段时间里，他遭到了多少挫折，克服了多少困难。当然，他在路上的所见所闻，是常人不可能享受到的。
更令人惊讶的是，在青藏高原，他遇见了一位德国人，骑着一辆很特别的自行车，从德国骑到中国，已经骑了17000公里。他的下一站是日本，那是他环球骑行计划的一部分。
我爱秋季。我爱骑行。

作者: 茄子 时间: 2010-9-20 22:00

原帖由 lottol 于 2010-9-20 13:11:00 发表
我英语六级，看懂了，但承认写不出来这样的文章。可以感觉到，国内的CET-6级的及格水平，相当于国外幼儿园的毕业水平。

哥们，过大学六级了？好极了！如果你现在是在从事外贸行业，应该够用的。只是有的老外在当面谈价格的时候，会故意说一些很难懂的话，以便占点便宜。这有点不好对付。

作者: 茄子 时间: 2010-9-20 22:26

原帖由 hengtong0577 于 2010-9-20 9:48:00 发表
楼主，又看见你在上网了。你怎么总在网上呀，你的学习任务完成了吗？你父母不为你着急吗？如果你是中学生，你应该为你父母想一想，父母养育你不容易，你不完成学习任务就上网，你父母和老师会为你担心的.你万万不能被计算机和网络给害了！你应当快快走出来！投入到学习中去！如果你是大学生,你就该多多为自已着想啊,现在社会竞争压力这么大,你要是不努力提高自已的知识文化素养,不努力增强自已的专业技能,以后你在社会上

Great! would you like to communicate with me in English? As you know it's a common language.
Should I give up my computer? Should I give up the internet? How much do you know me? Perhaps I'm such a person beyond your imagination. I admit that at the present, many people including those young ones, have become the victims of network yet it still exists exception. It's known by public that, more and more people take the network as a remarkable weapon for computers have already become a useful tool. Maybe you are an expert of computer being good at use some software including translation software. Accoding to what you wrote, it could be seen, you are rather efficient. I wish you will accept my advice: for our real lives, one foreign language is enough.
Waiting for your response.

作者: 啊杰 时间: 2010-9-20 23:22
OH MY GAD

作者: 茄子 时间: 2010-9-21 06:14

原帖由啊杰于 2010-9-20 23:22:00 发表
OH MY GAD

Aye, your God is also my God because there is only one God exists in the universe, I think.

作者: 茄子 时间: 2010-9-21 06:21

原帖由 音乐车手 于 2010-9-20 13:17:00 发表
what a woulderful season . but you can cycling this route, from Hangzhou to Wenzhou.

Yeah, from Hangzhou to Wenzhou, it's certainly an ideal route. I believe that somebody here has already achieved it many times. Thank you for your response.

作者: 茄子 时间: 2010-9-24 20:02
"音乐车手"? You are not only a cyclist but also a singer? great! I deem in this respect, we should learn from those foreigners who "白天骑车，晚上唱歌". I enjoy singing myself, wish there's chance for us to sing together.
Concerning English language, I suppose you are interested in it. If you have time, you may browse my post "聊聊学英语". I'm ready to accept you criticism.

http://bbs.66wz.com/thread-394128-1-1.html

作者: hengtong0577 时间: 2010-9-25 11:09

原帖由茄子于 2010-9-20 22:26:00 发表
[quote] 原帖由 hengtong0577 于 2010-9-20 9:48:00 发表
楼主，又看见你在上网了。你怎么总在网上呀，你的学习任务完成了吗？你父母不为你着急吗？如果你是中学生，你应该为你父母想一想，父母养育你不容易，你不完成学习任务就上网，你父母和老师会为你担心的.你万万不能被计算机和网络给害了！你应当快快走出来！投入到学习中去！如果你是大学生,你就该多多为

kan bu dong

作者: 茄子 时间: 2010-9-25 20:08
ge men bie da ha ha la.

作者: 茄子 时间: 2010-10-6 20:29
国庆佳节，哥们你唱歌了吗？

几年前写的帖，发上来消遣。。。。。。。。。。。。。

      卡拉永远OK?
卡拉OK给我们带来了欢乐。但是说“卡拉永远OK”对吗？
我们来看看，“卡拉OK”是什么意思。
笔者曾为此请教了几个老外，归纳起来如下：
卡拉OK是一位叫井上大佑（いかみおおとも）的日本人发明的。“卡拉”来自日文“カラ ”，相当于中文“空的”；而“OK”来自英文“orchestra”，即演奏席，乐队。“空的演奏席”，就是唱歌的时候不用乐队伴奏。
由此可见，说“卡拉永远OK”是错的。
（卡拉OK日语为“カラオケ”；英语则是大家熟知的“karaoke”。）
请各位多多指教。

（附英文篇）
  卡拉OK brings a lot of happiness to us. But is "卡拉永远OK" correct or not? Let's see, what does "卡拉OK" mean.
  The writer consulted several foreigners and got the answer which is given below:
  "卡拉OK" was invented by a Japanese who's named 井上大佑（いかみおおとも）. "卡拉" is from Japanese "カラ", means "empty", and "OK" is from English "orchestra", that's "a group of people who play musical instruments together". "empty orchestra", it's obvious that there's no band's accompaniment when you are singing.
According to what you've seen,  "卡拉永远OK" is wrong.
  (In Japanese, "卡拉OK" is "カラオケ" and in English, as you know, it's "karaoke".)
  Any comment will be welcomed.

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